I have jumped down to this lesson as its most relevant for me now. I have completed my advertise page.
Would love some feedback. Haven’t yet tackled the media page but I’m working on it. I don’t feel as confident doing that as my blog is so new, I don’t feel like I have much to put in it.
thanks in advance
The “Who Do We Target” section is very strong; it lets the prospective advertiser know exactly who your audience is (and, by extension, who it isn’t).
In the Stats section, I’d like to see consistent punctuation:
The Statistics below are taken from feedburner and Google analytics unless otherwise noted.
Alexia Ranking: 145,530 [Also- it’s “Alexa,” not Alexia]
Monthly traffic: 2,951 [Monthly Traffic]
Monthly Page Views: 5,177
Demographic: 51.2% US Traffic 12.2% Australia 7.6 % UK
Facebook fan page: 281 [Facebook Fan Page]
Twitter followers: 594 [Twitter Followers]
You may want to make a note for yourself (if you haven’t already) to update the stats on a monthly or quarterly basis.
I’d recommend adding a hyperlink to your Contact Form for every place where you say “contact”
I don’t like the use of the phrase “very honest” in your disclaimer section. You’re either honest or you’re not.